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<verse 1>
She had hair as black as the midnight sky.
She's the only thing I see when I close my eyes.
We're actually through, I can hardly believe it.
Might've been for the best the way I see it.
<chorus>
I am the day, and she is the night.
A relationship that could never end right.
My heart is now clean and sober.
It's still hard to think we're finally over.
.....we're finally over
.....over.
<verse 2>
Life hasn't been the same since she's been gone.
Everything has seemed to go wrong.
Feels like she took away my soul,
The day she left me standing out in the cold.
<chorus>
'Cuz I am the day, and she is the night.
A relationship that could never end right.
My heart is now clean and sober.
It's still hard to think we're finally over.
.....we're finally over
.....over.
<guitar solo>
<chorus>
I am the day, and she is the night.
A relationship that could never end right.
My heart is now clean and sober.
Now I see why we're finally over.
©2006-2010 ~Gu1tar-H33r0
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Well, this is my first crack at writing a song. It's obviously a breakup song, which I don't know why cuz I haven't gone through any breakups recently....Oh well.

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:iconshivarra:
Hey!!! I like that! Maybe it should be a little longer though....I dunno. I write music too, well I used to. Anyway...good song. Let me hear it if you get it recorded.

Shivarra

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Remember if I do record it, there's gonna be and intro and possibly and outro. And it's a fairly slow song too, so it should be at least 2 minutes long.

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:iconshivarra:
OK...cool, when you do record it...I want first copy! :D :hug:

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:icongu1tar-h33r0:
Alright, I'll make sure you get the VERY first one ;p

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:iconshivarra:
Yay me!!! :clap: =P

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:iconchrissy-chic-92:
okay. I actually love this.

Ryan you are an awesome writer and I hope it stays that way!!!

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Thank you :D

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